Help for my essay on Hamlet's Iliad. im a procrastinator and its due tomorrow :/?

Okay, so i have a rough draft for an essay on the Iliad due tomorrow. im a girl, a junior in high school and i need help because, first of all, i have trouble understanding the iliad since i am really bad at understanding proper english writing like that.. haha but im supposed to write about "the clic war between pion and responsibility" and i am supposed to use a few of these themes: war, honor/duty, revenge, women, fate, and tragedy. i kindddda sorrta not realllly have an outline.. :/ and so far i am using the conflicts Achilles vs. himself (his internal conflict) for 1 BD paragraph, and i talk about how he isolates/alienates himself and creates bitterness, then i go on to talk about how Achilles doesnt know if he should stay behind or go and fight, but insteead Patroclus goes to fight and dies, also how Achiles begins to isolate himself away from some of his closest friends (Odysseus). and the other BD paragraph is Achilles vs. Zeus and how Achilles asked zeus to have the Trojans win but in doing that, his dearest companion got killed, even though the Trojans started to get ahead. then i talk about how many Achaeans are killed and how Zeus grants Achilles wish, but Patroclus dies. now i am having so much trouble with figuring out how to word all this, and how to make the bd paragraphs flow, how to form a intro, and mainly, how to write a fricken thesis for this! i dont know where to start. PLEASE help me, it would be GREATLY appreciated..